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wow this story is grate it is lovely to read about the dress and wigs nice sexy uderware it reley makes me want to be dressed by two sexy girls

4JiCg0 Looking forward to reading more. Great article.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

yqSfSa Major thankies for the post.Thanks Again. Cool.

uBLLFc Major thankies for the article post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

   Loved your story.  None of that forced fem/dom crude with the sick sadistic overtones. Thank goddess. I do have 3 constructive criticism, however.  One, there is no "z" in surprise.  The diminutive of honey is 'hon not hun.  Hun was the name the Western powers called the German troops in WWI.  As in Attila the Hun.  Thirdly, modern man is known in geological terms as homo sapiens not homo erectus.  Homo erectus was our direct geological forebearer.  And, lastly (I know that comes to four but who's counting), you really don't need to use full caps all the time for emphasis.  It takes away from the structure and drama of the piece and really isn't  necessary.  Sometimes, you even use full caps when it makes no  sense.  It's somewhat akin to cussing.  If you cuss all the time it loses it's impact.  You have to know when to use the tool.   Other that the above writing critiques, it was a thoroughly enjoyable story.  Thank you/

WOW. Sure like the story about coming out and with Mom no less. Please keep it up. I'd like to see more.

The story'ok but it's more about you than your girl friends, any chance we might see their point of view about you?

I just love the detail you include;  the sex is graphic and the hairdressing is seductive.... Brilliant.  I hope my writing is half as good.  LOL WBG xx

Cathy,

Your writing is wonderful. You have a writing knack for making the personal things become alive so your readers can actually live the adventure with you.

I would love to have been invited to one of your parties. They sound so alive and wonderful.

Please keep up the great work so your audience can continue to enjoy your lovely style of writing.

A now faithful reader,

Sandi

cathy i just love the story of your life. i only wish that i had found out what i am 40 years ago. i think you must have great strenght of character to have ived as you have, or may be america is more tolerant of alternative life styles than britain. anyway good luck and keep writing, lots of love terri, somerset uk

Cathy, I just wish I could have been there for some of this action. Your writing is great. Hope to read more! Love, Kelly  Cincinnati, Ohio

Loved the story.  Hope to see others soon.  Have to agree with the comment regaring the use of paragraphs (but the story out weighed the grammar issue).  More!

xoxox

Janet

Cathy has shown a good talent for putting into words the feelings that I'm sure she must have inside.

This story may have a few things that may bother some readers but, it should not be overlooked for it has many good points of value.

I throughly enjoyed the reading of it and hope that I get the chance to read other's by Cathy.

This author and her talents is another reason why it's so nice to take a few minutes out of my day to read some of the fabulous stories posted here on this site.

Diane

This is a very exciting and erotic story.  I love the way John has been pulled into this and how his essential sweetness is the reason all these women want him, especially when he's dressed as Cathy.  I'm looking forward to reading more chapters to see how all this plays out.  I do, however, agree with patricia; you really need to break paragraphs more often.  It makes the story hard to read when the events all run together in big blocks of text.  But the fact that we're all staying with it, regardless of the difficulty, shows how good a story it is.  Bravo.

I tried to read your story but was getting a headache because you don't use a paragragh format. I'll check back as the little bit I did read looked promising.

Great beginning!  Nice to see there's none of the awfully cliched domination stuff.  We look forward to reading more.