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Down Under Odyssey
by Starhawk

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Comment by Angie on 11/25/15
Great story!  Thanks.

Comment by shirlee on 01/13/09
it's true, art does imitate life. have heard this particular story many times, but without the addition of "Cat". I have a clearer picture now....

Comment by Amanda on 04/26/07
If only this would happen in “real life”. A very romantic story, beautifully written! I too shed a tear. Thank you so much.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/06/07
One of my favorite stories on this site.  Really nicely written, with the two lead characters delineated very convincingly.

Eric


Comment by Garry C on 04/21/06
Excellent reading and a very enjoyable storyline with a lovely twist which i thought you managed to beautifully hold off to particularly good timing in the plot. Your accuracy for detail around Canberra was well researched and as a former resident of the town, gave your story a strong sense of reality.  Well done  

Comment by Denise  C on 04/07/06
I loved the story and really loved the outcome and I wish that it would be the out come of my life. I can see cats vison in her life and wish that it was also mine. It was a very heart felt story line and if you would go on with an extesion of the story and tell every on how the pair made out after. Thank very much for such a good story. Love to see and hear more frm you.

Comment by Vivien Britton on 01/01/05
Oy! Great story there mate! Excellent reading! Makes me want to go to Australia and have some fun and excitement for a fortnight or two!  Never stop writing ok?

                      Vivien

Comment by Tina on 01/20/04
Lovely, very romantic;  I wasn't sure how I would get into the story written from the perspective of a 'real man' but as it progressed it just seemed so easy, so that's down to the skill of the writer!!

Thanks, love Tina xx

Comment by Dave C on 04/12/03
I love the story line evry much and wish that I too could have a real romance like the main figure. I love the love that is shown by the main figures and wish that I could be in that way also. LOVE is the good thing about life . Please keep up you writing as I love your wonderful stories.

Comment by Nellie D on 04/22/02
A very nice romance story. The light and easy read with good plotline, well developed characters and good descriptions is a welcome change from some of the dark stories that populate this kind of fiction.



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