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Holly MacAllaister
by Karen Anne Summerfield

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Comment by Brian on 09/07/04
Though I don't generally care for bondage stories, this one is well written and fairly realistic.  I like, I like.
Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 04/19/02
Seems incomplete, though intriquingly different:  bondage without humiliation.  I guess I just don't get this bondage thing though.  Holly and cindy certainly seem like they should be equals and at the party, they seemed to work as a team, yet holly lets Cindy make her do things that must be highly uncomfortable and that must make her job much more difficult to do.  Why?  I guess I'll stick with Lincoln:  "Just as I would not be a slave, so I would not be a master."
Comment by Jan_Wytte on 04/19/02
Nice Going!!  A[pleasant bit of story telling.  Holds interest has subtle humor and fully entertains.  
Almost thought it was not going to have any Fetish reference, till you had her dress for the office.  
Story stands alone but would be good to develope Holly some more in some follow up adventures.  Has excellent merit for a continuing series, in my mind.
Characters are sufficiently developed, plaot and story line move along smoothly and even some minor twist dont detract from the nice tale.
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Comment by Jennifer on 04/19/02
I LOVED IT!!!!

Holly seems to be my kind of Gurl!  A sub that is very much in control of her control.  And throw in a bit of majic to boot :)

Hoe we see more of Holly.


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