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The New Witch
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Comment by THE CRITIC on 02/20/04
Keep on writing--This is better than good--the story flows like a warm summer breeze in the heat of the night--Thank You Comment by Doug on 05/23/03 A delightful tale, without the harshness and crudity that mars so many stories, thank you Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 03/18/03 Diana, this is a great story...However, the only "witches" I have ever heard of that can only help people and not do harm to themselves or others or destroy property, are the Wiccan covens. However, there are testimonials on record that "evil" witches do exist and do all that Wiccans are forbidden. Comment by Dave on 06/29/02 If this were true then I wish for it to come true for me Comment by Jack on 04/23/02 Good story- a little too pasive, but I still liked it - some nice touches - like the fear of governement involvement Comment by Jack Andrews on 04/20/02 great job on this story...i liked both characters had some development. i could sympathize with 'em both. i do wish it had more of the actual transformation -- i don't know why, but that what gets me. Comment by kimmie on 04/20/02 thank you this was a very nice,well written enjoyable story |
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