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Now, Jane
by Jane L.S.

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Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
8lzi7C Thank you ever so for you article post. Want more.

Comment by julih on 12/27/12
brilliant story more please if it could happen in real life how wonderfull

Comment by Girlie Maid Daphne on 03/02/12
Please! Please, Mistress, can you put us out of our misery and tell us what happened over the next three days.
I would kiss your feet to know.

Comment by Shark on 04/27/08
Dear Mistress

Please do not hold us in suspense any longer
This has been great reading, really the best i have read


Comment by juliej on 08/23/06
this new part is brilliant i look foreward to reading more as as possible brilliant story its great the way its going if it keeps in that way it will be great  more please asap one of the best stories i have read so far thank your more please

Comment by julie j on 07/19/05
the story continues to be excellent and a great read i look foreward to reading more about this and what other plans linda has for jane please write the next part soon i would love to also read about where jane gets chained to the basement floor for somthing please write the next part soon wonderfull thankyou

Comment by juliej on 06/13/05
an excellent 2 part and i lookforeward s to part thing brilliant thankyou

Comment by juliej on 07/11/04
a brilliant story well  written and explained i would have preffered more bondage like being chained in a cage for the night and more tighter clothes something really to show he was a girl the punushments were good i would like to read more of this story you could do so much more during the three days and finish of with making him your perminant slave  brilliant more please

Comment by jade on 11/10/03
This is one of the best stories I have read on the web, and sheepishly, I have read a lot.  I hope you can find the time to continue the story.  I greatly appreciated what you have done so far.

Comment by pussy slut on 04/17/03
Excellent tale. Simply the best I have perused here. More please Mistress!

Comment by julie on 03/26/03
an excelent begining to what looks like it is going to be a great story i hope that you have not finished as there is a lot more to do withit i look foreward to the next installment soon please

Comment by brooke on 04/19/02
I hope your not finish'd. Hoping she keeps him that way a brings a friend or two into the room. Male and/or female .. good start.. will watch for more.



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