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Rediscovering Caitlin
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Comment by me suba on 12/21/18
H7pmDW Very good post! We are linking to this great content on our site. Keep up the good writing. Comment by Angie on 03/06/17 Lisa, thank you for writing this very sweet and touching story. I hope you have gone on to pursue writing. You can turn a phrase so beautifully, such as "It was a lovely moon lit night, and the pungent smell of the salt water assaulted his nostrils as the waves crashed on to the beach in phosphorescent explosions of sound." Nicely done! Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 08/12/09 What a lovely story. I loved it a lot. Comment by Briar on 10/29/08 What a lovely, tender tale! You made it flow in unexpected directions, keeping the suspense going until the so romantic end. Lots of emotional things, making the use of paper hankies necessary at times. Altogether very beautiful, like your other stories too. Thank you for enriching our lives with your creative grenius. Comment by horseman on 02/05/03 A sweeet story, though the rape was graphic, it helped put into perspective the pain that Lyn/Caitlin felt. This story also showed to me, that love from parents and friends can help a person if not overcome pain,then ease it so it can be more bearable. Comment by Chris on 01/13/03 What a surprise! I usually avoid x and especially xxx rated stories but I read your two R rated stories and they were very good, so I decided to give Rediscovering Caitlin a try. Wow this is great! Excellent character development and such love and tenderness and real emotional content. I really appreciate Janet and her amazing commitment and ability to see what is important, people. True love is so rewarding. This is a good read, and the story even ends and feels finished and complete. The themes of wholeness and redemption are thoughtfully and tenderly treated. And thank you for not making everything easy, there is a lot of realism in the depth of the stuggle. How did you accomplish so much in a relatively short story. I'll probably never know. Just read it ok! Comment by Nicki on 04/20/02 What a beatiful story of both love and compassion.It seems to have been written with heartfelt depth and such a great insight into the mind of Caitlin.Please write another? Nicki Comment by Rose on 04/19/02 Great Story with what I think is the right ending. |
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