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Slaves of Acteon
by Alyssa S

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Comment by Skylar on 06/15/10
Great story! I felt it was written very lifelike. I enjoyed it very much

Comment by Roland Boyd on 04/30/09
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Comment by Matt on 02/16/05
Very tightly written, a neat contrast to Nano where the character change is more voluntary (at least at first).  I second the comment about the slave girl of gor flavor.

All in all very well done.  Eagerly awaiting more if there is more out there!

Comment by adam on 09/30/04
I loved the story, very well written, it changed my outlook on life.

Comment by Milida on 06/03/03
Fantastic well written story, it would be great if you could write more in this style. The character development and the slavery details are wonderful.

Comment by Kismet on 09/26/02
Alyssa has an awesome writing style and is amongst the best tg writers out there. The clarity and straightfordness of her narratives and her attention to detail is flawlessly smooth.

Comment by dave ingram on 04/22/02
Very good background and scene description
Good storyline, although rather convoluted at the end.

An intriguing mixture of Slave Girl of Gor meets.....
A full length book written in this style should be a winner !!



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