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Trish and Rob - A Love Story
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Comment by elaine on 11/28/15
trish realy turned me on i wish some one like her would dress me in ladies undies and a nice wig and makeup Comment by buy cheap oem software on 02/11/12 buBfdZ Author, Shoot yourself a knee..!! Comment by Silvia. on 05/20/11 Hi Cathy. Comment by Steve on 12/12/10 Truly a beautiful story, please may we have more? Thankyou, Steve Comment by Jim on 05/07/09 Yes...I'm back...and still swooning every time I read the story of Trish. You make me melt and inflame my desire to meet Trish..fall in love with her and live forever in bliss! Comment by Jim on 12/24/08 Cathy: I LOVE the story. I am a literate, educated man...who would love meet someone like Trish and fall in love forever. Too many authors think that simply depicting the sex is being "creative". You write with passion, desire, feeling and intelligence. And that is the sexiest approach of all. Thank you. Comment by Starhawk on 03/01/02 Cathy, Good start to your story here. I admit to not being into the detailed nature of the sex scenes (I prefer to leave a fair amount to the imagination of the readers), but I know others are. Still I find most of my own stories gravitating to be from the male-in-love-with-a-shemale view. I like this twist. |
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